Q: hey!
i love horses loads, and I currently take care of my horse friends when I chance in the afternoon. and she gives lessons in return.
I live in a townhouse, but I would go...
A: from a magazine horse would be very costly and difficult. How about being an editor or reporter for a magazine horse? or a photographer for a magazine horse? You can learn to train horses? you can raise horses expensive? you could give...
Politics »
can anyone PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE edit my essay ? 10 points i promise.. its just some of the sentences are just really awkward and i don't know what to do about them...
its supposed to explain how the alger hiss case launched nixon's political
I am no good at editing but it is very interesting
Adolescent »
am applying for an IB program. I am in 8th grade, and would like you to proof read this. Please leave comments or questions on how to improve this application, or if you think I should add more. Thanks SO much!
ALSO- I have a question.
First question: capitalize English; remove comma after English in second sentence.
Second question: "sence" is spelled since. I would further explain your answer - what type of work, what kind of animals. Do you...
Primary & Secondary Education »
I am applying for an IB program. I am in 8th grade, and would like you to proof read this. Please leave comments or questions on how to improve this application, or if you think I should add more. Thanks SO much!
ALSO- I have a question.
Your three words that describe you seem like your trying a bit too hard. Scale it down a notch. I can't give you examples because I don't know what those words mean. Your other answers are really good though.
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Absorbing everything he read and observed, he gradually turned his hobby into his life's work, making it his full-time occupation in 1984. |
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“I bought a 600-year-old stone farmhouse with no running water, and my hobby and passion have been to renovate it. I did it all on my own. |
if smaller "intentional community" cohabiting with five other former residents of the Albany commune, plus his children, on a macadamia hobby farm in
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